http://www.thelocal.se/7650/20070619/
I found an interesting and comical article about a 42 year old man from Sweden, who gets state benefits from claiming that him listening to heavy metal music as a disability. As interesting and funny the article was, I noticed a few things wrong with the writing. The writer uses a lot of quotes, but I found he forgets to use the quotation marks entirely. For example:
"I think it's extremely strange. Unless there is an underlying diagnosis it is absolutely unbelievable that the job centre would pay pay out. The writer forgot to put the last quotation mark after the period. It's also unclear who is saying what quotes.
Also, it talks about how the local (the website) talked to a psychologist about the matter. I would like to know what psychologist they talked to, and also what three psychologist said it was necessary for the man to listen to metal to avoid being discriminated against. What does discrimination and a disability have anything in common on why he needs to listen heavy metal?
I feel there are a lot of grammatical errors in this article. But even with the errors I still found it to be quite amusing, but I just wish it was written a little better.
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Yes i myself have noticed few errors which are very little but can be very confusing while reading the article.
ReplyDeleteThis article seems very bizarre, i have never heard a man listening to music instead of working at his job and still getting paid.
I'm not surprised about the Swedish man being payed for being totally insane with his claims for disability. The British government pays known terrorists who have sought political asylum due to the fact that they are wanted for murder in their own countries. But the British government claims that they have made a pact with these known terrorists, political asylum, including support for them to sit on their lazy murdering butts, in exchange that they call off all present or future bombings in England by Muslim terrorists. Talk about insane.
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